Second review of Don’t Mess With Earth

Author Cliff Ball draws on his considerable knowledge of history, folklore and Christianity to craft a convincing retelling of humanity’s time on Earth.

Told mostly from the point of view of a newly sworn-in U.S. President, we learn that Earth has existed under the shadow of secrets and lies for thousands of years. As Noah was building his wooden ark to escape the flood, a highly developed race of people called Terrans was designing starships and planning to leave the earth entirely.

The Terrans travel to an Earth-like planet and set up a colony, naming it Terra. They explore their new system and meet many friendly cultures. They also meet the Ragnor, a race obsessed with military conquest. The Ragnor attack Terran ships relentlessly and without cause.

Soon the Terrans return to Earth to see if their human cousins have advanced. They find Egypt at the time of the Pharaohs and decide the earth humans are far too primitive to help Terra fight the Ragnor.

Some Terrans decide to interfere with human development and pose as Earth people. From the times of King Arthur to Genghis Khan, Terrans make their mark on history.

Centuries later, a spy base is set up on Mars. From Mars, the Terrans watch as the Great War explodes in Europe and later as World War Two engulfs the entire planet.

The Ragnor visit Earth in cloaked ships and begin abducting and experimenting on humans. Tales of abduction and UFOs spread around the globe. A Ragnor scout ship crashes in New Mexico in 1947. The Americans develop the Area 51 program at Roswell. The project’s mandate is to use the technology from the downed alien craft to defend the United States against her enemies.

Sixty years later, a secret starship is ready, the crew trained, and the newly elected Present must address the nation and the world. He orders the ship to attack Earth’s alien foe. Is one advanced ship enough to match the combined fleets of both Terra and Ragnor? Is America on the brink of its greatest military victory since D-Day? Or is it doomed to fail like no other combat mission in history?

Ball has written an intriguing new take on history. He keeps the pages turning, explaining historical events in his own unique style. The story builds to an explosive climax that won’t leave you disappointed.

I recommend Don’t Mess With Earth to Sci-Fi and alternative history fans.

Reviewed by WR Potter for Reader’s Choice Reviews.


6 thoughts on “Second review of Don’t Mess With Earth

  1. Wow! I want to buy this book! What a great concept for a novel. Check out first and recently released novel, Long Journey to Rneadal. This narrative tale is a romantic action adventure in space and is more about the characters than the technology.


    • Cool, I’m glad you want to buy the book, and thanks for the comment. Looking up your book on Amazon, I see that it’s 552 pages and it’s your first? Wow! I’m working my way up to 80,000+ words, so I’m amazed at people who can write that much. Good luck with the sales!


  2. Really? Judging by your tumbnail, I’ve probably been writing a bit longer than you. Be certain to dream big and then you’re imagination will let you write the scenes in your head. And it’s a lot easier to write than it was for me to find an agent then publisher!


  3. I’m 35, and except for being a slacker with writing in my 20’s, I’ve been writing since I was 10. Anyway, I used to think that anybody writing anything over 100,000 plus words were just rambling on and on and going off topic for the most part, but, since I’ve put more effort into writing novels, that’s not always the case. I’m just really weak with characterization, which I’m trying really hard to work on with my next two novels.


  4. Don’t know exactly how to help you with characterization except to read all types of novels. By reading other authors’ styles of characterization you may find a method/style that works for you. Good luck! As peviously mentioned, I still have a few years on you.


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